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Write a letter to your penfriend. Tell him or her about your personal experiences of sport. Include the following information: which sports have you played, what your attitude to sport is and in what way sport can help people in their lives.

Write a letter to your penfriend. Tell him or her about your personal experiences of sport. Include the following information: which sports have you played, what your attitude to sport is and in what way sport can help people in their lives. 00gQ
Hi Kate, Sorry for not writing for so long. Hope you’re fine. You asked me to tell you about my personal experience in sport. I’m active person and I like to try everything new. I have tried several kinds of sport in my life. Dancing brings me the most pleasure. I have been dancing since I was five years old. I took part in various competitions and championships. Moreover, advantage of that was traveling. I visited a lot of European countries when I participated in competitions. Also, I have tried swimming. There are a lot of benefits in this kind of sport. It strengthens your muscles and works your whole body. In addition, it helps you to relax and feel free from any problems. Now I prefer going to the gym. It is good not only for my body, but also for improving my mood. Generally, sport occupies a vital role in our life. It keeps us fit, healthy and makes us active. The secret to having a healthy and positive lifestyle is to have a positive mind and body. Sports is such an activity that it can be taken up by anyone. At any age and any point in life. It is just important to find the one, that would be like a cup of tea for you. That’s all for now. I’d better go now as I have to do my homework. Tell me please what’s your opinion on that’s matter. Looking forward to hearing from you. Much love, Ann
Hi Kate,

Sorry for not writing for
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so
long. Hope you’re fine.

You asked me to
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tell
you about my personal experience in
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sport
. I’m active person and I like to try everything new. I have tried several kinds of
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sport
in my life. Dancing brings me the most pleasure. I have been dancing since I was five years
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old
. I
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took part
in various competitions and championships.
Moreover
, advantage of that was traveling. I visited
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a lot of
European countries when I participated in competitions.

Also
, I have tried swimming. There are
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a lot of
benefits in this kind of
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sport
. It strengthens your muscles and works your whole body.
In addition
, it
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helps
you to relax and feel free from any problems.
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Now
I prefer going to the gym. It is
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good
not
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only
for my body,
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but
also
for improving my mood.

Generally
,
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sport
occupies a vital role in our life. It
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keeps
us fit, healthy and
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makes
us active. The secret to having a healthy and
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positive
lifestyle is to have a
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positive
mind and body.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Sports
is such an activity that it can
be taken
up by anyone. At any age and any point in life. It is
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just
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important
to find the one, that would be like a cup of tea for you.

That’s all for
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now
. I’d better go
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now
as I
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have to
do my homework.

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Tell
me
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please
what’s your opinion on that’s matter. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Much
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love
,

Ann
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your penfriend. Tell him or her about your personal experiences of sport. Include the following information: which sports have you played, what your attitude to sport is and in what way sport can help people in their lives.

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9 paragraphs
251 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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