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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Lyjp
Dear Nav, Its really thankful to you that you will help me by taking care of my house and pet when I will be on holidays. As you know it has been long time to go outside with my family. Therefore, we are planning to go Shimla for a week. Our train will be departured after two days from tomorrow and we will come on next Tuesday. If you will have to talk me then you can call me on 1234567890. Im leaving my pet on your responsibility. My pet’s name is Tommy and he does not eat food without milk so whenever you will offer him meals then a cup of milk must be given to him. Also, i will give my house’s key to you yesterday. Please make my house neat and clean on daily basis and open the windows of lobby in the morning to freshen the home from inside. I hope that you will take care of my pet and house carefully. Thanking you xyz
Dear
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Nav
,

Did you mean "It's" (="It is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
really
thankful to you that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me by taking care of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
and pet when I will be on holidays.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know it has been long time to go outside with my family.
Therefore
, we are planning to go
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Shimla
for a week. Our train will be
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departured
after two days from
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
tomorrow and
we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
on
next
Tuesday. If you will
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have to
talk me then you can call me on 1234567890.

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Im
leaving my pet on your responsibility. My pet’s name is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Tommy and
he does not eat food without milk
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
whenever you will offer him meals then a cup of milk
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to him.

Also
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
will give my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house’s
key to you yesterday.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
neat and clean on daily basis and open the windows of lobby in the morning to freshen the home from inside.

I hope that you will take care of my pet and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
carefully
.

Thanking you

Possible spelling mistake found.
xyz

IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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