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you would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country

you would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country xJBb

Dear Sir /Madam, My name is Samuel Finn and I am writing regarding the upcoming seminar to be held in Toronto, Canada in November this year. I work as a senior executive in a pharmaceutical company and the content of this seminar will provide me with the expert knowledge necessary for my role. As I live in Australia and it will be an overseas trip for me, I would like some further information about the seminar, such as the duration of the seminar (including the exact dates), and whether or not the agenda for each day and the speakers are different. Also, as I am looking for some inexpensive accommodation close to the seminar venue, it would be very helpful if you could suggest some options. Lastly, I would like to get some information on seminar fees, as well as the typical costs of meals and travel in Toronto. My company will be paying for these, however I need to prepare an estimate in order to get approval to participate in the seminar. I am planning to finalise the details of my trip soon and it would be great if you could help me with my queries at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Samuel Finn

Dear Sir /Madam,

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Finn and
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seminar
 to be held
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company
 and the content of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforumdiscussionround tableworkshopconventionsymposium
seminar
 will provide me with the expert knowledge necessary for my role.

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live
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some
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seminar
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seminar
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whether or not
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different
. Also
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seminar
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very
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get
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get
 approval to participate in the seminar.

I am planning to Possible spelling mistake. 'finalise' is British English.finalize
finalise
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of my trip This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and it would be great if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with my queries at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully
,

Samuel Finn