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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. p0V0
Dear Organizer I am planning to attend the World A. I. conference which would be held in Houston on the 1st of March 2022. But first I would like to collect some detailed information relating to the venture. More specifically, I need to work out the dates of the event. I will be flying in from Melbourne Australia, so my preference would be arriving one day earlier than the actual start date. It is also important to get an understanding of the agenda for the conference. I will have my family travelling with me during the trip, hence I do not want to attend any sessions that are irrelevent to my field of research. Finally, and perhaps the most crucial piece of information, is the accomodation and the cost associated with the event. I have to make certain that the total cost of the hotel, flights and any additional travel expenses do not exceed $15, 000 dollars in total. Yours sincere John Snow
Dear Organizer

I am planning to attend the World A. I. conference which would
be held
in Houston on the 1st of March 2022.
But
first
I would like to collect
some
detailed information relating to the venture.

More
specifically
, I need to work out the dates of the
event
. I will be flying in from Melbourne Australia,
so
my preference would be arriving one day earlier than the actual
start
date.

It is
also
important
to
get
an understanding of the agenda for the conference. I will have my family travelling with me during the trip,
hence
I do not want to attend any sessions that are
irrelevent
to my field of research.

Finally
, and perhaps the most crucial piece of information, is the
accomodation
and the cost associated with the
event
. I
have to
make
certain that the total cost of the hotel, flights and any additional travel expenses do not exceed $15, 000 dollars in total.

Yours sincere

John Snow
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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