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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. (Informal Letter) Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions on how to care for your pet Describe other household duties Write at least 150 words.

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. (Informal Letter) Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions on how to care for your pet Describe other household duties baj6
Dear Anna, Thank you very much for looking out for my car, I very much appreciate your kindness and plesent manner, As I will be gone until the end of june, for my strcture organizational of the company, Feel free to send me an email or call on my phone number which is on the right side of the kitchen table just on the left side by the fridge, As you might know very well from your pervious visits to my house, That my cat is very mad when she is not well fed, Make sure to fill up the dish of milk the one that under the sink, The cart always on the look out for that milk dich, Plus some yellow cheee well be very interestingly enough for a night meal, You may feel free to per the cat on the back as much as she would let you, Lasty, I would like to mention a few details regarding my Mail box, The one is just infornt of the house, I have been waiting for bank statement That was not there last time I checked, please make sure to look out leakage by the water pipes under the sink, it is not effectively tight to hold the water, The satalite lines are working well, Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours Faithfully,
Dear Anna,

Thank you
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much for looking out for my car, I
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much appreciate your kindness and
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send me an email
or call on my phone number which is on the right side of the kitchen table
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on the
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side by the fridge,

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visits to my
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, That my cat is
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mad when she is not
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well fed
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sure to fill up the dish of milk the one that under the sink, The cart always on the look out for that milk
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yellow
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interestingly
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for a night meal, You may feel free to per the cat on the back as much as she would
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, I would like to mention a few
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regarding my Mail box, The one is
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infornt
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checked
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sure to look out leakage by the water pipes under the sink, it is not
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lines are working
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, Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours
Faithfully
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. (Informal Letter) Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions on how to care for your pet Describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
224 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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