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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem Bnq6
Dear Sir, I am XYZ, a resident of street No-1 Ferozepur Cantt. I am writing this on behalf of our society members to express our dissatisfaction with the way waste is collected from households in our society. The municipal corporation has hired manual scavengers to collect the household garbage. This system of manual collection is not working properly because laborers seem reluctant to pick up the trash with their hands. Consequently, they are on leave of absence on most days and no one comes to collect the rubbish. We are facing an even bigger problem because there is a huge garbage bin just in front of our house. It is always overflowing with garbage. As a result, it has become a breeding ground for dengue mosquitoes and houseflies. They enter our homes making us prone to developing myriads of infectious diseases. I would like to suggest some viable solutions. Firstly, the local administration should provide proper equipment and tools to scavengers so that they do not feel awful about collecting garbage. Secondly, I request you to provide different colored bins for the segregation of waste in our society. I hope you will consider my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir,

I am XYZ, a resident of street No-1
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Ferozepur
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Cantt
. I am writing this on behalf of our society members to express our dissatisfaction with the way waste
is collected
from households in our society.

The municipal corporation has hired manual scavengers to collect the household garbage. This system of manual collection is not working
properly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
laborers seem reluctant to pick up the trash with their hands.
Consequently
, they are on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
of absence on most days and no one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to collect the rubbish. We are facing an even bigger problem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
there is a huge garbage bin
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
in front of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. It is always overflowing with garbage.
As a result
, it has become a breeding ground for dengue mosquitoes and houseflies. They enter our homes making us prone to developing myriads of infectious diseases.

I would like to suggest
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
viable solutions.
Firstly
, the local administration should provide proper equipment and tools to scavengers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they do not feel awful about collecting garbage.
Secondly
, I request you to provide
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
colored bins for the segregation of waste in our society.

I hope you will consider my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem

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204 words
6.0
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