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Write a letter to your manager. In your letter 1) give details of the course 2) say how the course would be useful 3) explain how the company could help you do this course.

Dear sir, I am writing in the connection with an essential online training course which can be informative for the company. This essential cloud computing course is about 5 hours in total duration which can be delived by expert professor of University of waterloo. The necessary knowledge of cloud computing is mandatory now a days for the employees working in IT industry. After successful completion this course, company would have benefit to get the more productive output from the employees. There is the manadatory registration required to enroll in course well in advance as there are limited spots available. The charges for one time registration is about $100. If its registred from company for more than 5 emplyees there will be the discount given. I hope I would get the help financially from company to do get in. I would also greatful if a highly configured computer is given with internet connectivity in the personal room. I hope I will be given a chance to get in. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfuly, Jatin Patel
Dear sir,

I am writing in the connection with an essential online training
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course
which can be informative for

the
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company
. This essential cloud computing
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course
is about 5 hours in total duration which can be
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delived


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by
expert professor of University of
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waterloo
.

The necessary knowledge of cloud computing is mandatory
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now a days
for the employees working in IT industry.

After successful completion this
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course
,
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company
would have benefit to
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get
the more productive output from the

employees. There is the
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manadatory
registration required to enroll in
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course
well in advance as there
are limited


spots available.

The charges for one time registration is about $100. If its
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registred
from
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company
for more than 5
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emplyees
there

will be the discount
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given
. I hope I would
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get
the
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help
financially
from
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company
to do
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get
in. I would
also


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greatful
if a
highly
configured computer is
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given
with internet connectivity in the personal room.

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I
hope I will be
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given
a chance to
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get
in.
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I
look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
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faithfuly
,

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Jatin
Patel
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager. In your letter 1) give details of the course 2) say how the course would be useful 3) explain how the company could help you do this course.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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