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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Task: Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Task: Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. VX33
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to ask for information about the seminar that you are conducting during the next week. I am an electronics wholesale dealer in Pakistan and I am interested to take part in this work-related seminar. I think that it would be very beneficial for me to see the latest electronic appliances and have an excellent opportunity to make contacts with different companies. Therefore, I need to get some information in detail such as the total period of time your seminar takes and the leaflets of different scheduled programs. Beside this, I have a plan to come with my two staff members so what would be the arrangements of accommodation and total expenditure, which you have estimated for each person. You could send the above-mentioned information to my e-mail address. I would like to receive it as soon as possible because of adequate preparation before the departure. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Athar Nafees
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
information about the seminar that you are conducting during the
next
week.

I am an electronics wholesale dealer in Pakistan and I
am interested
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in this work-related seminar. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that it would be
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very
beneficial for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the latest electronic appliances and have an excellent opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
contacts with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
.
Therefore
, I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
information in detail such as the total period of time your seminar takes and the leaflets of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
scheduled programs. Beside this, I have a plan to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
with my two staff members
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
what would be the arrangements of accommodation and total expenditure, which you have estimated for each person.

You could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the above-mentioned information to my e-mail address. I would like to receive it as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of adequate preparation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the departure.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Athar Nafees
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Task: Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
161 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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