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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in connection with the "multi-purpose power cord and socket" you supplied to me earlier last month per procurement request from "The Good Company".

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in connection with the "multi-purpose power cord and socket" you supplied to me earlier last month per procurement request from "The Good Company". bXWW
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in connection with the "multi-purpose power cord and socket" you supplied to me earlier last month per procurement request from "The Good Company". The product you sent has malfunctioned and caused severe damages to my home office setup. I used your power cord and socket to connect multiple electronic devices to connect to power supply while working from home. Last week, a spark in the plug point of your product caused a power failure in the power supply board. Upon further investigation by the electricity board officer, it was ascertained that this incident resulted in un-repairable damages to the power cord and socket, which consequently affected my other equipments like wifi router and hands-free speaker. This has impacted my work activities as I'm unable to connect to the internet due to the damaged wifi router and use other devices such as charging cables and USB convertible appliances to power up my laptop and security devices. I understand that the product is covered under warranty per the terms and conditions document. And, I would really appreciate if you could send a free of cost replacement directly to me or at my company address as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully John Doe
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you in connection with the
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multi-purpose
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power
cord and socket
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"
you supplied to me earlier last month per procurement request from
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"
The
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Good
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Company
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. The product you
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sent
has malfunctioned and caused severe damages to my home office setup.

I
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used
your
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power
cord and socket to connect multiple electronic devices to connect to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
supply while working from home. Last week, a spark in the plug point of your product caused a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
failure in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
supply board. Upon
further
investigation by the electricity board officer, it
was ascertained
that this incident resulted in
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un-repairable
damages to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
cord and socket, which
consequently
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affected
my other equipments like
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wifi
router and hands-free speaker.

This has impacted my work activities as I'm unable to connect to the internet due to the damaged
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wifi
router and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
other devices such as charging cables and USB convertible appliances to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
up my laptop and security devices.

I understand that the product
is covered
under warranty per the terms and conditions document. And, I would
really
appreciate if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a free of cost replacement
directly
to me or at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
address as
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soon
as possible.

Yours
Faithfully


John Doe
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in connection with the "multi-purpose power cord and socket" you supplied to me earlier last month per procurement request from "The Good Company".

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  American English
6 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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