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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday, write a letter to your friend

Dear Mehwish, I hope you are doing well. i received your letter in which you mention of planing to go for a camping in this summer holiday. This news brought me immense pleasure and excitement both as i would love to go with you in this trip, getting fresh air and be so close to nature will make you fell enlightened. Now comes to the concerning part is the hot weather and the accommodation. In the mid of June with no air conditioner and other appliances make you handicap and the whole trip will be a disaster. I can't wait to spend summer vacations with all of my friends, wish you a great trip warm regards, Anita
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Mehwish
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received your letter in which you mention of planing to go for a camping in this summer holiday. This news brought me immense pleasure and excitement both as
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would
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go with
you in this trip, getting fresh air and be
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close to nature will
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you fell enlightened.
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Now
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to the concerning part is the hot weather and the accommodation. In the mid of June with no air conditioner and other appliances
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make
you handicap and the whole trip will be a disaster. I can't wait to spend summer vacations with all of my friends, wish you a great trip

warm regards,
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Anita
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday, write a letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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