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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, 63gB
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to participate in the seminar you are going to organise next month in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia. I learned about it from your website and I believe such a seminar will help me perform better in my current job. As the website did not include all the details, I am hoping that you would not mind answering some of my queries. As I am residing in Bangladesh, I would like to know the exact dates, venue and program schedule so that I can plan for the trip. Various actions, including taking time off from office, applying for a visa and preparing for the trip are related to the seminar schedule. In addition to that, please inform me about the accommodation arrangement - whether it would be managed by the host or do I need to arrange it myself? I would also like to know about the total cost of attending the seminar and other expenditures like accommodation, meals, fares etc. I request you to provide the details of my queries so that I can complete the arrangement well ahead of time.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to participate in the
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seminar
you are going to
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organise
next
month in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia. I learned about it from your website and I believe such a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me perform better in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
job. As the website did not include all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
, I am hoping that you would not mind answering
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of my queries.

As I am residing in Bangladesh, I would like to know the exact dates, venue and program schedule
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can plan for the trip. Various actions, including taking time off from office, applying for a visa and preparing for the trip
are related
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
schedule.

In addition
to that,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
inform me about the accommodation arrangement
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
whether it would
be managed
by the host or do I need to arrange it myself? I would
also
like to know about the total cost of attending the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
and other expenditures like accommodation, meals, fares etc.

I request you to provide the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of my queries
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can complete the arrangement well ahead of time.
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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187 words
6.0
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