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Write a letter to your friend, I hope you are getting better, we had a cricket match last weekend and all team was there but you were there, we miss you a lot. We had match with Bahria town team as you they are very competent team. We were 12 and they were 12 aswell, we won the task and we played first. We got 150 runs in 20 overs and i get 56 runs which includes 4 sixs and 2 fours and then i got run out. They have started very good start but could make runs and got 140 runs and all team were out on 140 runs, I got 2 wickets. They played very well as you they are good team. you were missed and every one were talking and asking about you because they all know how good batsman you are. I hope your recovery very soon and waiting to play with you on our next match which would b on next weekend. Wish you a quick recovery. Take care. your friend. Shuz
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I hope you are getting better, we had a cricket match last weekend and all
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aswell
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task and
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We
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150
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out. They have
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started
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good
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start
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140
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were out on 140
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2 wickets. They played
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batsman you are. I hope your recovery
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and waiting to play with you on our
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match which would b on
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weekend. Wish you a quick recovery. Take care.

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your
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Shuz

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
176 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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