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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job k9y8

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to you today to inform you about my upcoming study plan, the following months of my life will be very critical, i will be studying abroad for two years, At first I thought management information system is the ideal course of study for me but aparently this was not the case, Now I am enroled into a history course, Most of all the employess they are interested in job eperience as well as qualifications, I very much interested in working as an tour guid in the clocal art museum in the city center, I know how long you have been working in the museum for, The following reasons might clear my intention behind my planning to have a part-time job, First, Having a part-time job well incerase my skills that I need in my future as well as my management skills and timetable, An extra income might be very useful to surport myself during my study time abroad. I think you can help me getting a job inside the museum given the fact that you are a very respectful man and well-known, You can set up an advert for hiring students who are willing to work as a tour guid, Looking forward to hearing from you,

Dear Sir/Madam,

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skills
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 myself during my study time abroad.

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think
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help
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given
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Looking forward to hearing from you, 