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You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event.Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: • Explain why you are interested • Give detailed suitable past experience • Suggest ways you might help with the event

You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: • Explain why you are interested • Give detailed suitable past experience • Suggest ways you might help with the event PmA2
Dear Sir, I am writing in respect of the advertisement circulated in the Lagos Times Newspaper to express my interest to contribute as a volunteer in your upcoming event. I have always been passionate about animal rights issues and as a result, I have taken a keen interest in your organisation. In this part of the world, little or no attention is paid to the welfare and conservation of animals but your agency has changed that by pioneering and championing the protection of animals both domestic and wild. Therefore, I thought it wise to apply for the volunteering role in the upcoming Stand for Animals event and also share some of my relevant experiences. I am a graduate of zoology and during my university years I interned at a zoo for 6 months, hence I am familiar with the behavioural pattern, preferred food and habitats of various animals, all of which are crucial to their survival. In view of this, I believe I am capable of the job. Currently, I work as a sales representative and I can use my marketing skill to further promote the event, hence more attention may be generated which will boost awareness and donations from well-meaning individuals toward your cause and ultimate goal. I look forward to your revert. Yours faithfully, Kola Benson
Dear Sir,

I am writing in respect of the advertisement circulated in the Lagos Times Newspaper to express my interest to contribute as a volunteer in your upcoming
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event
.

I have always been passionate about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
rights issues and
as a result
, I have taken a keen interest in your
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organisation
. In this part of the world,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
or no attention
is paid
to the welfare and conservation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
your agency has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
that by pioneering and championing the protection of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
both domestic and wild.

Therefore
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
it wise to apply for the volunteering role in the upcoming Stand for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Animals
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
and
also
share
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of my relevant experiences. I am a graduate of zoology and during my university years I interned at a zoo for 6 months,
hence
I am familiar with the
Possible spelling mistake. 'behavioural' is British English.
behavioural
pattern, preferred food and habitats of various
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
, all of which are crucial to their survival.

In view of this, I believe I am capable of the job.
Currently
, I work as a sales representative and I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
my marketing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
to
further
promote the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
,
hence
more attention may
be generated
which will boost awareness and donations from well-meaning individuals toward your cause and ultimate goal.

I look forward to your revert.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kola Benson
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IELTS letter You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: • Explain why you are interested • Give detailed suitable past experience • Suggest ways you might help with the event

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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