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Dear Sir or Madam, I am German national from Berlin and at the present I am studying for a Master degree in Mechanical Engineering with an emphasis in jet engines here, at Oxford University, where I have been for the last 6 months. In order enhance my learning, I am looking for a part-time job in the field of jet engines or aircraft manufactruing. However, if no vacancies are available at the moment for what I am looking for please note that I am open to any other job that is related to mechanical engineering and not necessarily specific to any discipline. I would be ready to start immedialty but it is preferable to be in the afternoons. I have 5 extensive years of experience in the jet engine industry which I gained post my graduation back in Berlin. Furthermore, I participated in several journals and publications in my early years at college related to the field. Moreover, I am competent engineer with advanced skills in engineering softwares. In addition, I speak English and German fluently as well as I have the bacics of French. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dani Krus
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am German national from Berlin and at the present I am studying for a Master degree in Mechanical Engineering with an emphasis in jet engines here, at Oxford University, where I have been for the last 6 months.

In order enhance my learning, I am looking for a part-time job in the field of jet engines or aircraft
manufactruing
.
However
, if no vacancies are available at the moment for what I am looking for
please
note that I am open to any other job that
is related
to mechanical engineering and not
necessarily
specific to any discipline. I would be ready to
start
immedialty
but
it is preferable to be in the afternoons.

I have 5 extensive years of experience in the jet engine industry which I gained post my graduation back in Berlin.
Furthermore
, I participated in several journals and publications in my early years at college related to the field.
Moreover
, I am competent engineer with advanced
skills
in engineering
softwares
.
In addition
, I speak English and German
fluently
as well
as I have the
bacics
of French.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dani
Krus
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IELTS letter You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:

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  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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