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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Smith, I am writing this to let you know that I got the invitation for the 3 days seminar that your team is conducting on the open source software's. I would like to inform you that I am very much interested in the seminar, as I believe it will open doors for many innovative ideas. Also, I am excited to travel to London, this will be my first international trip. Furthermore, I would like to know some details about the seminar. Could you please confirm if this is a single one time event or there are multiple seminars? If so, which dates are available at this time. Along with that could you also provide the detailed list of each program and its schedule. It would definitely benefit me. Along with that, as I have already mentioned this will be my first international trip, I am not sure about the accommodations. Could you please suggest some nearby areas which will be good for accommodation. Any nearby budget hotel suggestion is appreciated. Or the accommodations are included with the seminar costs? if so, what is the overall cost of the 3-days seminar. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Monika Bhoware
Dear Smith,

I am writing this to
let
you know that I
got
the invitation for the 3 days
seminar
that your team is conducting on the open source software's. I would like to inform you that I am
very
much interested in the
seminar
, as I believe it will open doors for
many
innovative
ideas
.
Also
, I
am excited
to travel to London, this will be my
first
international trip.

Furthermore
, I would like to know
some
details
about the
seminar
. Could you
please
confirm if this is a single one time
event
or there are multiple
seminars
? If
so
, which dates are available at this time. Along with that could you
also
provide the detailed list of each program and its schedule. It would definitely benefit me.

Along with that, as I have already mentioned this will be my
first
international trip, I am not sure about the accommodations. Could you
please
suggest
some
nearby areas which will be
good
for accommodation
.
Any nearby budget hotel suggestion
is appreciated
. Or the accommodations
are included
with the
seminar
costs?
if
so
, what is the
overall
cost of the 3-days seminar.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Monika
Bhoware
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
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