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Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs,

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Dear Elna, I hope you are doing well. How have you been? I'm sorry for not writing a letter to you lately. Do you remember i told you about my current job and the workload i have been handling for the past 5 years. Guess what! i got fed up and passed my resignation last month. Good thing I was able to find new job at North General Hospital. I was a bit nervous during the interview but luckily i got the positioned as Senior Staff Nurse in Medical-Surgical ward unit. I felt happy and contented with my new job as it is related with my specialty as Surgical Nurse and Chief Nurse treat us fairly. The supervisor offered me to do preceptorship course training for additional learning skills. By the way, i need to stop here. Been busy taking good care of my niece most of the time. My sister also sends her regards to you. Keep safe always! Best regards, Kristine

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 course training for additional learning This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
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 her regards to you.

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Keep
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Best regards, Kristine

IELTS letter Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs,

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

162 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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