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Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs,

Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs, ElAJB
Dear Elna, I hope you are doing well. How have you been? I'm sorry for not writing a letter to you lately. Do you remember i told you about my current job and the workload i have been handling for the past 5 years. Guess what! i got fed up and passed my resignation last month. Good thing I was able to find new job at North General Hospital. I was a bit nervous during the interview but luckily i got the positioned as Senior Staff Nurse in Medical-Surgical ward unit. I felt happy and contented with my new job as it is related with my specialty as Surgical Nurse and Chief Nurse treat us fairly. The supervisor offered me to do preceptorship course training for additional learning skills. By the way, i need to stop here. Been busy taking good care of my niece most of the time. My sister also sends her regards to you. Keep safe always! Best regards, Kristine
Dear
Elna
,

I hope you are doing well. How have you been? I'm sorry for not writing a letter to you lately. Do you remember
i
told
you about my
current
job and the workload
i
have been handling for the past 5 years. Guess what!
i
got
fed up and passed my resignation last month.

Good
thing I was able to find new job at North General Hospital. I was a bit nervous during the interview
but
luckily
i
got
the positioned as Senior Staff Nurse in Medical-Surgical ward unit. I felt happy and contented with my new job as it
is related
with my specialty as Surgical Nurse and Chief Nurse treat us
fairly
.

The supervisor offered me to do
preceptorship
course training for additional learning
skills
. By the way,
i
need to
stop
here. Been busy taking
good
care of my niece most of the time. My sister
also
sends
her regards to you.

Keep
safe
always
!

Best regards, Kristine
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs,

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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