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Dear mr. Ali, I am writing to you about the training program in UK. As you know, I have been chosen for the training program in UK, and I heard about the role of the social events’ organizer, I would like to inform you that I am so interested in this role. since I was improving myself in this field, And I took a lot of courses about it. I also participated on a similar role at another program. although I would like to ask you about some information about the role, What are the requirements for it? And how many hours are demanded? Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to your response. Best regards, Ali Khalid.
Dear
mr
. Ali, I am writing to you about the training program in UK. As you know, I have
been chosen
for the training program in UK, and I heard about the
role
of the social
events
’ organizer, I would like to inform you that I am
so
interested in this
role
.
since
I was improving myself in this field, And I took
a lot of
courses about it. I
also
participated on a similar
role
at another program.

although
I would like to ask you about
some
information about the
role
, What are the requirements for it? And how
many
hours
are demanded
?

Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to your response.

Best regards, Ali Khalid.
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IELTS letter litter about the training program

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
120 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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