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You would like to go to the park tomorrow. Write an email to your English friend, Sammy. In your email:

You would like to go to the park tomorrow. Write an email to your English friend, Sammy. In your email: MyL39
Dear Sammy, It've been a long time since we went together, I very miss you. So tomorrow is Sunday, I would like to ask you to go to the park with me. I will go there by my own car and pick up you at 5. pm. At the park, we can go around and play many rides such us cacousel, whirwhind, miniature train, raging rapid and ride roller coaster. And maybe a bite to at the end of day if we're feeling up. So I hope you reposne my mail as possible as you can. Have a great day.
Dear Sammy, It've been a long time since we went together, I
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miss you.
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tomorrow is Sunday, I would like to ask you to go to the park with me. I will go there by my
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car and pick up you at 5.
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pm
. At the park, we can go around and play
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rides such us
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whirwhind
, miniature train, raging rapid and ride roller coaster. And maybe a bite to at the
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of day if we're feeling up.
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I hope you
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my mail as possible as you can. Have a great day.
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IELTS letter You would like to go to the park tomorrow. Write an email to your English friend, Sammy. In your email:

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  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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