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Dear Sir or Madam, The purpose of writing this letter is to express my interest in the voluntary work at the museum. I am on break due to COVID from my university which will allow me to work at Star museum. By doing unpaid work, I can explore various scientific discovery which had happen in the past. I am taking mechanical engineering which will allow me to strengthen my knowledge. Additionally, there is an electronic telescope I am enormously interested in; I can see various stars which I have just seen in my imagination only. There are numerous skills I have to offer. I will be very much helpful in performing administrative tasks such as dealing with customers and keeping track records of items. Likewise, if you require someone can maintain floor layouts for relocating items, I am proficient in it too. I will be delighted in arranging various artwork in a sophisticated way which will attract more visitors. I am available from next week Monday till the end of next month. The best suitable time for me will be from 10 AM to 4 PM. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Harsh.
Dear Sir or Madam,

The purpose of writing this letter is to express my interest in the voluntary work at the museum. I am on break due to
COVID
from my university which will
allow
me to work at Star museum.

By doing unpaid work, I can explore various scientific discovery which had
happen
in the past. I am taking mechanical engineering which will
allow
me to strengthen my knowledge.
Additionally
, there is an electronic telescope I am
enormously
interested in; I can
see
various stars which I have
just
seen
in my imagination
only
.

There are numerous
skills
I
have to
offer. I will be
very
much helpful in performing administrative tasks such as dealing with customers and keeping
track
records of items.
Likewise
, if you require someone can maintain floor layouts for relocating items, I am proficient in it too. I will
be delighted
in arranging various artwork
in a sophisticated way
which will attract more visitors. I am available from
next
week Monday till the
end
of
next
month. The best suitable time for me will be from 10 AM to 4 PM.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Harsh.
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6.5
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