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write a formal letter tfor travel agency for the reason that is you are going to travel with pupils. ask about these the museum opening days and costs

write a formal letter tfor travel agency for the reason that is you are going to travel with pupils. ask about these the museum opening days and costs MMNQQ
Dear sir or madamI am writing to inquire about your advertisement in the September issue of Travel agents newspaper. With my pupils I have planned to tour for Amir Temur museum, but I would be grateful if you could send me further details. Firstly, I would like to know on what days the museum are opened for school pupils. Another matter I need information on is the cost of ticket. I also require data on the model artifacts which are sold. I look forward receiving details which we need for travelling. Thank you in advance for your helpYours faithfullyGulruh Isomurodova
Dear sir or
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madamI
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am
writing to inquire about your advertisement in the September issue of Travel agents newspaper. With my pupils I have planned to tour for Amir
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Temur
museum,
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but
I would be grateful if you could
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send
me
further
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details
.
Firstly
, I would like to know on what days the museum
are opened
for school pupils. Another matter I need information on is the cost of ticket. I
also
require data on the model artifacts which
are sold
. I look forward receiving
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details
which we need for travelling. Thank you in advance for your
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helpYours
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faithfullyGulruh
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Isomurodova
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IELTS letter write a formal letter tfor travel agency for the reason that is you are going to travel with pupils. ask about these the museum opening days and costs

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  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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