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You have received a bill from the company which supplies the electricity to your house. The bill contains a figure much higher than you expected. Write a letter to the manager at the electricity company. In your letter • tell the manager about the letter you received • explain why you think this amount is too high • describe what you would like the company to do

You have received a bill from the company which supplies the electricity to your house. The bill contains a figure much higher than you expected. Write a letter to the manager at the electricity company. In your letter • tell the manager about the letter you received • explain why you think this amount is too high • describe what you would like the company to do 3aGnd
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain regarding my home electricity bill which is beyond my expectations. I am Tina, living in park avenue and have been using electricity provided by your company for two years. I received a bill on 1st May for the duration of one month. As per the bill description, It states that a total of 1000 units was consumed in the previous month which cost me  20000 rupees. I am surprised by this figure because it is not accurate as per the current single unit rate. Moreover, I would like to add here that for the last fifteen days I was out of town and, hence, at my place the use of electricity was totally shut. Because of that, I could not understand how this large amount has occurred. Could you please check the mistake from your systems and help me to resolve this issue. Please reconsider my case and give me the correct bill as soon as possible. I look forward to a prompt revert from you. Yours faithfullyTina
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain regarding my home electricity
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bill
which is beyond my expectations. I am Tina, living in park avenue and have been using electricity provided by your
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company
for two years.

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I
received a
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bill
on 1st May for the duration of one month. As per the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bill
description, It states that a total of 1000 units
was consumed
in the previous month which cost me
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20000 rupees. I
am surprised
by this figure
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because
it is not accurate as per the
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current
single unit rate.

Moreover
, I would like to
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add
here that for the last fifteen days I was out of town and,
hence
, at my place the
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use
of electricity was
totally
shut.
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Because
of that, I could not understand how this large amount has occurred.

Could you
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please
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check
the mistake from your systems and
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help
me to resolve this issue.
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Please
reconsider my case and give me the correct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bill
as
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soon
as possible.

I look forward to a prompt revert from you.

Yours
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faithfullyTina
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IELTS letter You have received a bill from the company which supplies the electricity to your house. The bill contains a figure much higher than you expected. Write a letter to the manager at the electricity company. In your letter • tell the manager about the letter you received • explain why you think this amount is too high • describe what you would like the company to do

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7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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