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People in your area are having problems with their internet connection

People in your area are having problems with their internet connection qVErd
Dear sir, I'm writing in regards of the bad Global communications internet connection in ojo area of Lagos Nigeria. Since the beginning of this month we have been unable to utilize the service provider efficiently and effectively this has affected a large number of the residents of ojo apparently, we have been battling with the network hoping it will get better as the days goes by but all hopes has been dashed, I personally have been unable to work from home as my daily routine is to create content for my YouTube page, post frequently and respond to necessary mails. I have also been unable to attend meetings online, do any bank transactions nor catch up with social media which is a general problems from my findings. Global communications should kindly see to providing better services by sending experts to check their network mast in the area by so doing they will be able to ascertain the major problems, they should also endeavour to make provisions for more mast to be mounted in the vicinity this will enhance faster and better network.
Dear sir, I'm writing
in regards of
the
bad
Global
communications
internet connection in
ojo
area of Lagos Nigeria. Since the beginning of this month we have been unable to utilize the service provider
efficiently
and
effectively
this has
affected
a large number of
the residents of
ojo
apparently
, we have been battling with the network hoping it will
get
better as the days goes by
but
all hopes has
been dashed
, I
personally
have been unable to work from home as my daily routine is to create content for my YouTube page, post
frequently
and respond to necessary mails. I have
also
been unable to attend meetings online, do any bank transactions nor catch up with social media which is a general
problems
from my findings. Global communications should kindly
see
to providing better services by sending experts to
check
their network mast in the area by
so
doing they will be able to ascertain the major problems, they should
also
endeavour
to
make
provisions for more mast to
be mounted
in the vicinity this will enhance faster and better network.
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IELTS letter People in your area are having problems with their internet connection

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5.5
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