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Are disturbed by the rubbish and litter problem in your area and Street. Write a letter to the local council. Your letter, describe the situation, inform them about the possible consequences, some suggestions to solve the problem

Are disturbed by the rubbish and litter problem in your area and Street. Write a letter to the local council. Your letter, describe the situation, inform them about the possible consequences, some suggestions to solve the problem Nrp0q
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the serious garbage trouble in the Urbana Estate society of the city. There is a public park in our vicinity where all sorts of people visit and litter their waste in the nearby area. As a result, there are garbage heaps even in our street. To make the matter worse, the council's rubbish collection truck comes twice a week. The collected waste materials attracts a wide variety of disease-spreading insects and rodents which is a great threat to the local residents. More over, the trash spreads disturbing foul odour in the air. I would like that the council should put extra garbage bin across the street. In addition to that rubbish must be collected daily. I strongly assert that the problem must be addressed at the earliest. Yours Faithfully Amit
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the serious garbage trouble in the
Urbana
Estate society of the city. There is a public park in our vicinity where all sorts of
people
visit and litter their waste in the nearby area.
As a result
, there are garbage heaps even in our street. To
make
the matter worse, the council's rubbish collection truck
comes
twice a week.

The collected waste materials attracts a wide variety of disease-spreading insects and rodents which is a great threat to the local residents. More over, the trash spreads disturbing foul
odour
in the air.

I would like that the council should put extra garbage bin across the street.
In addition
to that rubbish
must
be collected
daily.

I
strongly
assert that the problem
must
be addressed
at the earliest.

Yours
Faithfully


Amit
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IELTS letter Are disturbed by the rubbish and litter problem in your area and Street. Write a letter to the local council. Your letter, describe the situation, inform them about the possible consequences, some suggestions to solve the problem

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  American English
7 paragraphs
141 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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