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letter of recommendation for master degree

To Whom It May Concern: It is my pleasure to write this letter of recommendation for my bachelor degree student, Rizmy Otlani Novastria, for studying in the XXX University. I taught accounting and taxation and I have been worked as Rizmy’s tutor for the taxation competition since 2008. She has made the university’s name proud by bringing a trophy in every national tax competition. I remembered she was very outstanding in Income Tax and VAT. hence in every tax and accounting competition she became the Income Tax and VAT specialist. Her analyzing skills is sharp so that she could easily solve the tax cases. For instance, in the Bakrie Management School Competition and in The National Tax Competition, she and her team awarded as the runner up. Although she was a brilliant student, she could balancing her study with organization. Since 2009, she has actively involved in the Department of Education in the Tax Student Association. Furthermore, she voluntarily tutor and taught taxation course to the university students in order to help the others understand about taxation scheme and get a higher degree. Rizmy really stands out for her motivation, passion, and time management. During her study, she was able to write books about taxation and sell it for fund raising in the Tax Student Association and I used to become the first buyer for her products. The collected funds subsequently distributed to support the orphanage near the campus area. Finally, she finished her diploma degree in 2011 with an excellence GPA and ranked second best student among more than 1000 students. Even, when she continued her study in the Bachelor Degree in 2015-2017, she could maintain her achievement as the top three best student in the university, Recently, I saw that she has just build a social media platform namely @Tax. Policy in Instagram with the intention on increasing literacy on taxation and policy. She recapped her publications, the book or journal that she has read, and design info graphics for the content publications. Until recently, she is still volunteering in teaching or becoming a speaker for the students conference in the State Finance of Polytechnic of STAN University. This is the first time I have found a female student who is very brilliant but really cares about other people needs. With so many contributions that she has given to the prior university, I believe Rizmy Otlani is an outstanding candidate for the University of XXX, and that she is worthy of the honor. Respectfully
To Whom It May Concern:

It is my pleasure to write this letter of recommendation for my bachelor degree
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student
,
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Rizmy
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Otlani
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Novastria
, for studying in the XXX
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University
. I taught accounting and
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taxation and
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been worked
as
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Rizmy
’s tutor for the
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taxation
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competition
since 2008. She has made the
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university’s
name proud by bringing a trophy in every national
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tax
competition.

I remembered she was
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very
outstanding in Income
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Tax
and VAT.
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hence
in every
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tax
and accounting
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competition
she became the Income
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Tax
and VAT specialist. Her analyzing
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skills
is sharp
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so
that she could
easily
solve the
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tax
cases.
For instance
, in the
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Bakrie
Management School
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Competition
and in The National
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Tax
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Competition
, she and her team awarded as the
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runner up
.

Although she was a brilliant
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student
, she could
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balancing
her study with organization. Since 2009, she has
actively
involved in the Department of Education in the
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Tax
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Student
Association.
Furthermore
, she
voluntarily
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tutor
and taught
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taxation
course to the
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university
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students
in order to
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help
the others understand about
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taxation
scheme and
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get
a higher degree.

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Rizmy
really
stands out for her motivation, passion, and time management. During her study, she was able to write books about
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taxation
and sell it for
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fund raising
in the
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Tax
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Student
Association and I
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used
to become the
first
buyer for her products. The collected funds
subsequently
distributed to support the orphanage near the campus area.

Finally
, she finished her diploma degree in 2011 with an excellence GPA and ranked second best
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student
among more than 1000
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students
. Even, when she continued her study in the Bachelor Degree in 2015-2017, she could maintain her achievement as the top three best
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student
in the university,

Recently, I
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saw
that she has
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just
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build
a social media platform
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@Tax
. Policy
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in Instagram
with the intention on increasing literacy on
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taxation
and policy. She recapped her publications, the book or journal that she has read, and design info graphics for the content publications. Until recently, she is
still
volunteering in teaching or becoming a speaker for the
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students
conference in the State Finance of Polytechnic of STAN
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University
. This is the
first
time I have found a female
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student
who is
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very
brilliant
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but
really
cares about other
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people
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needs
.

With
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so
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contributions that she has
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given
to the prior
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university
, I believe
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Rizmy
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Otlani
is an outstanding candidate for the
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University
of XXX, and that she is worthy of the honor.

Respectfully
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IELTS letter letter of recommendation for master degree

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
415 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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