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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. 5dwN
Dear Sis, Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to enquire that after looking into various commercial websites to purchase Samsung QLED 5G technology Television, but many shops in our locality do not provide the home delivery for this product. On your website it was mentioned that your private business provides the facility for home delivery along with the installation of the electronic television. I am pondering over that I would like to purchase this new Technology television from your shop, so please inform that how much time it would take for delivering the television at my resident and also I would be looking further that what will be cost of this product as it is new Technology in market. Simultaneously, I have a concern that what will be the payment method that you would be looking from a customer to pay you, a complete payment or there is an EMI facility in your shop during the purchase of goods. In case Samsung QLED Television is not in stock, how long it will take to get this product from another part of the country and during that particular time we are not in the city, then how much time you can hold the good in a warehouse.  It will be great help from your side if you can provide me complete information about the concerns that I have expressed in the letter. I am enclosing my residential address in the letter as mentioned Aspire Condo, Tha-Pra Bangkok, Pincode 10120. Your Sincerely, Anuj Mehta
Dear Sis,

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
that after looking into various commercial websites to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
Samsung
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QLED
5G technology
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Television
,
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but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
shops in our locality do not provide the home delivery for this product. On your website it
was mentioned
that your private business provides the facility for home delivery along with the installation of the electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
. I am pondering over that I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
this new Technology
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
from your shop,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
inform that how much time it would take for delivering the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
at my resident and
also
I would be looking
further
that what will
be cost
of this product as it is new Technology in market.

Simultaneously
, I have a concern that what will be the payment method that you would be looking from a customer to pay you, a complete payment or there is an EMI facility in your shop during the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
. In case Samsung
Possible spelling mistake found.
QLED
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Television
is not in stock, how long it will take to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
this product from another part of the country and during that particular time we are not in the city, then how much time you can hold the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
in a warehouse.  It will be great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
from your side if you can provide me complete information about the concerns that I have expressed in the letter.

I am enclosing my residential address in the letter as mentioned Aspire Condo,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tha-Pra
Bangkok,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Pincode
10120.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
Sincerely
,

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Anuj
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Mehta
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IELTS letter You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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  American English
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252 words
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