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You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. Describe your purchase order of the book. Explain the importance of the book. Say what you what the company to do for you.

You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. Describe your purchase order of the book. Explain the importance of the book. Say what you what the company to do for you. w6Ed
Dear Amazon I am writing to inform you about the problem that I am facing because of a recent purchased item from your website. I bought one Ielts Cambridge Preparartion 2021 volume 1 book 15 days before. The order number is ABZ00677 and its under my name, Rupa Choudhary. It was mentioned that the approximate time to deliver it to my place would be maximum of 10 days, but its not been delivered till now. I have my examination in two months and I really need this practice book to get updated on the new changes for this year. Since this volume have listed all the upadated information for the coming examination I can not just let go of the material. So, kindly look into the issue as mentioned above and deliver the book as fast as you can. I hope to receive it soon. Thankyou, Yours faithfully, Rupa Choudhary.
Dear Amazon

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I have my examination in two months and I
really
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get
updated on the new
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changes
for this year. Since this volume have listed all the
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upadated
information for the coming examination I can not
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just
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let
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, kindly look into the issue as mentioned above and deliver the book as
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fast
as you can. I hope to receive it
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IELTS letter You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. Describe your purchase order of the book. Explain the importance of the book. Say what you what the company to do for you.

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