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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were pleased with the food and service. Write letter to your restaurant manager. In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant; explain the reason for the celebration; say what was good about the food and the service

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were pleased with the food and service. Write letter to your restaurant manager. In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant; explain the reason for the celebration; say what was good about the food and the service KNL3
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing this letter to let you know that we had a wonderful time at your restaurant. I had a meal with my colleagues yesterday night before shifting to new city to start my new job. Let me explain in further detail. Me and my team visited your restaurant on 11th March night to celebrate my accomplishment. I recently got the new job with higher salary as compare to my previous job and yesterday was my last day as working employee of the company. Because I wanted to give my farewell party to my favourite co-workers, I decided to arranged the dinner at your restaurant. Moreover, I not only wanted to say good bye to them but also wanted to make memories with them. I’m pleased with not only all arrangements but also with food service provided even though in short notice. All my guests were happy about how well restaurant managed the party including music, dance, celebration, for example. Furthermore, the quality and taste of all food items were so amazing that I would like to come back again to try new dishes. Thank you for service us. Your faithfully, Bhavesh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing this letter to
let
you know that we had a wonderful time at your
restaurant
. I had a meal with my colleagues
yesterday night
before
shifting to
new
city to
start
my
new
job.

Let
me
explain
in
further
detail.
Me
and my team visited your
restaurant
on 11th March night to celebrate my accomplishment. I recently
got
the
new
job with higher salary as compare to my previous job and yesterday was my last day as working employee of the
company
.
Because
I wanted to give my farewell party to my
favourite
co-workers, I decided
to arranged
the dinner at your
restaurant
.
Moreover
, I not
only
wanted to say
good bye
to them
but
also
wanted to
make
memories with them.

I’m
pleased
with not
only
all arrangements
but
also
with food service provided
even though
in short notice. All my guests were happy about how well
restaurant
managed the party including music, dance, celebration,
for example
.
Furthermore
, the quality and taste of all food items were
so
amazing that I would like to
come
back again to try
new
dishes.

Thank you for service us.

Your
faithfully
,

Bhavesh
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IELTS letter You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were pleased with the food and service. Write letter to your restaurant manager. In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant; explain the reason for the celebration; say what was good about the food and the service

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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