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You are studing for a qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ask for some time off to complete a qualification,suggest what you so later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company

You are studing for a qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ask for some time off to complete a qualification, suggest what you so later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company BKpm
Dear sir, I am linardo, not only I am an employee in your esteemed company but also persuading distance masters of Business from Lovely Professional University. Now I am in last semester and looking forward for 3 months leave from company so that I can attend my exams and complete my without any hindrance. Although I have done almost all syllabus, yet, it requires more preparation to get higher marks in all curicullams as my examination session has been started from coming month and will be end in next month. consequently, I require one month for revision prior to final papers. My degree will despite enhance my career opportunity but also helps to perform well in your multinational organization. I shall be great thankful to you for this act of kindness. I hope you will permit me 3 months paid holiday for my examination period. I sure you to be an eager beaver after complete my study and must do 1 hour overtime without payment for 3 months. Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Linardo
Dear sir, I am
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company
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persuading distance masters of Business from Lovely Professional University.
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I am in last semester and looking forward for 3
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months
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leave
from
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company
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so
that I can attend my exams and complete my without any hindrance.

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yet
, it requires more preparation to
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get
higher marks in all
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curicullams
as my examination session has been
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from coming
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month
and will be
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end
in
next
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month
.
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consequently
, I require one
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month
for revision prior to final papers.

My degree will despite enhance my career opportunity
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but
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to perform well in your multinational organization.

I shall be great thankful to you for this act of kindness. I hope you will permit me 3
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
months
paid holiday for my examination period.
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I
sure you to be an eager beaver after complete my study and
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must
do 1 hour overtime without payment for 3 months.

Look forward to your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Linardo
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IELTS letter You are studing for a qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ask for some time off to complete a qualification, suggest what you so later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company

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