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You would like to borrow a camera from your friend. In your letter write: why you want the camera. When you want it and when will you return it.

You would like to borrow a camera from your friend. In your letter write: why you want the camera. When you want it and when will you return it. 7LaRY

Dear simon, Hope you are hale and hearty and good of spirits. I am writing this epistle to solicit a favor from you regarding borrow your camera for some days. As you know, the status quo of our country have been wreak havoced owing to pandemic. My sister's nupital has been fixed an year ago and lately, despite we can not defer the function but will do in a low-key. Hapelessly, we are not able to book a photographer for all the functions because of some proscriptions. Furthermore, i perceive you have a good quality HD DSLR camera. I was envisaging that it will be lucrative and alleivate our burden if you lend your camera to me for some days. My cousin has cognizance about photography, nevertheless we will fend the camera prudently as it costs an arm and a leg. I aspire the camera on 10th September in cock and crow, hence function will be start in the twilight. Anon after all the functions, i will get it back to you on 14th September after transfer all the photos. I will let you apprise further if in case of deferment the dates. I will really and trully indebted you if you aid my family to not get down the dumps otherwise our presumptive to frolic marriage will go into vain. This will also assist us to capture some whale of time and will reminisce us whenever we will see the photographs. I hope you will give me a leg up in this desperate time. Yours lovinglyMarc

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