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we have an opening for a qualified sales manager who can lead the worldwide sales team execute strategies for increasing business opportunities while expanding the customer e. The sales manager of the worldwide sales team will have primary responsibility for E US. and overseas operations, focusing mainly on Asia. Thank you.

we have an opening for a qualified sales manager who can lead the worldwide sales team execute strategies for increasing business opportunities while expanding the customer e. The sales manager of the worldwide sales team will have primary responsibility for E US. and overseas operations, focusing mainly on Asia. Thank you. XlnyP
Dear Jane Strong, I’m writing in respond to your email dated June 22 regarding a vacant position. I’m extremely happy to receive this email. Thank you for give me a chance to express what I have about an opening for a qualified sales manager. Firstly, I have more than five years in sale management at home and abroad. Secondly, I have a good communication skill and I am quite confident because I can attract others through my first meeting. Finally, I wonder if you can give me an opportunity to prove this. Moreover, if you don’t believe my words, here are the pictures was attached above to prove what I did. Sincerely, My.
Dear Jane Strong,

I’m writing in respond to your email dated June 22 regarding a vacant position. I’m
extremely
happy to receive this email. Thank you for give me a chance to express what I have about an opening for a qualified sales manager.
Firstly
, I have more than five years in sale management at home and abroad.
Secondly
, I have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
communication
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
skill and
I am quite confident
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because
I can attract others through my
first
meeting.
Finally
, I wonder if you can give me an opportunity to prove this.
Moreover
, if you don’t believe my words, here are the pictures
was attached
above to prove what I did.

Sincerely
,

My.
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IELTS letter we have an opening for a qualified sales manager who can lead the worldwide sales team execute strategies for increasing business opportunities while expanding the customer e. The sales manager of the worldwide sales team will have primary responsibility for E US. and overseas operations, focusing mainly on Asia. Thank you.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
113 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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