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Write an email to your friend about an interesting experience that you had in you life

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Dear BF! Life is full of many interesting experiences, some of which we tend to forget, but as for others, we remember them for a long time. Today, I would like to talk about such an experience “ Summer course 2019 at Yen Tu Pagoda”, which I will never forget It was during a long summer holiday about 2 years ago, when my high school just closed, covid 19 haven’t spread in Viet Nam and I decided to apply to Yen Tu Pagoda summer course to experience a peaceful life. The Pagoda was very famous, not only because of its huge size but also because of its special building architecture. Anyway, I was very excited about my trip. In fact, after arriving at Yen Tu pagoda. I could see the most beautiful view in the world such as the mouse, clean air and kindly friends. However, the action was I never forget is climb the mountain. I had a new lifestyle, I woke up at 5 am, did exercise, and meditated to 6 am. The exciting thing was that I could actually see collective activities. In second, I forgot about my friends, who so kindly and support me during the summer course. Finally, That is an interesting experience I think you should try in the future.
Dear BF!

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, which I will never forget

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a peaceful life. The
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view in the world such as the mouse, clean air and kindly friends.
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collective activities. In second, I forgot about my friends, who
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