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You would like some advise about what to look out for when buying a car. Write letter to manager of car producting company

You would like some advise about what to look out for when buying a car. Write letter to manager of car producting company 0BMy5

Dear Sir/Madam, I would appreciate it if you could give me some advise about what i look out for when tam buying a new car. I have such kind of problem and I need your help. My name is Linda Steel. I work at school. I and my husband have enough cash for pursaching a new car. From my chilhood i like cars, espesially light blue cars. My dream is to have a new one. At last my dream come true, our family is buying a new car. However, we do not know what we look out for it. Futhermore, my friends infom me that some cars were not work correctly, some of its details does not work. My husband heard that our neighbour pursached a new one and it does not work at all. nawadays i and my husband have such kind of problem. I would appreciate it if you could give me your advise as soon as possible. Your faithfully, Linda Steel.

Dear Sir/Madam, I would appreciate it if you could give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Did you mean "advice" (noun)?advice
advise
 about what Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 look out for when tam buying a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. I have such kind of problem and I need your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. My name is Linda Steel. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 at school. I and my husband have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 cash for Possible spelling mistake found.preaching
pursaching
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. From my Possible spelling mistake found.childhood
chilhood
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 like You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
, Possible spelling mistake found.especially
espesially
 light blue You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
. My dream is to have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 one. At A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "my dream" or "last dream"?my dreamlast dream
last my dream
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 true, our family is buying a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. However
, we do not know what we look out for it. Possible spelling mistake found.Furthermore
Futhermore
, my friends Possible spelling mistake found.informinfoinf ominfo m
infom
 me that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 were not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
correctly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 does not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
. My husband heard that our Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.neighbor
neighbour
Possible spelling mistake found.preached
pursached
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 one and it does not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 at all. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNawadays
nawadays
 i and my husband have such kind of problem. I would appreciate it if you could give me your The word 'advise' is a verb. Did you mean "advice" (noun)?advice
advise
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, Linda Steel. 