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You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged.

You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. JB1w
Dear Sir or Ma’am, I am writing this letter to complain you for, I have been order an online gym kit with full accessories with order number 0012542 on 15th March 2021, but when it received, there is damaged so many items like dumbbells set and its rod. I am very disappointed from this order because, I have expected awesome based on pictures which are mentioned on your portal. Unfortunately, I received this product, and I am not indeed happy with that, so humbly requested to you that kindly refunds my order value, Here by mentioned the details and collect the product as I have been received. However, review aforementioned details and do further procedure for the return product as early as possible, as per product policy rule of returned terms and conditions. Kindly go through address information as per invoice. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Thank you in advanced, Yours Sincerely, Vishal A Vadhel
Dear Sir or Ma’am,

I am writing this letter to complain you for, I have been
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
order
an online gym kit with full accessories with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
order
number 0012542 on 15th March 2021,
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but
when it received, there
is damaged
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so
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many
items like dumbbells set and its rod. I am
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very
The usual collocation for "disappointed" is "with" or "in" or "by" or "at" or "about" not "from". Did you mean "disappointed with" or "disappointed in" or "disappointed by" or "disappointed at" or "disappointed about"?
disappointed from
this
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order
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because
, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
awesome based on pictures which
are mentioned
on your portal.

Unfortunately, I received this
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product
, and I am not
indeed
happy with that,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
humbly
requested to you that kindly refunds my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
order
value, Here by mentioned the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
and collect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
as I have
been received
.

However
, review aforementioned
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
and do
further
procedure for the return
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
as early as possible, as per
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
policy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
of returned terms and conditions. Kindly go through address information as per invoice.

I look forward to hearing from you as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Thank you in
Did you mean "advance"?
advanced
,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Vishal A
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Vadhel
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IELTS letter You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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