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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 7bDb
Dear Mr & Mrs Martin, Hi! I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my concern about the noise that comes from my home. As you do not know my parents are coming over and I want to renovate my bedroom. The work is going on for the last few days and I am really sad to hear about the noise that disturbs you and your family but the work will be done by the day after tomorrow. I deeply apologize for all the trouble I have caused you and your family. I will instruct the worker to not make much noise and not cause unnecessary trouble for your family. I will also make sure that the workers will work until the evening time so that you can sleep during the night-time. Thank you for bearing with me. I am sorry to have caused you trouble. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Mr & Mrs Martin,

Hi! I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my concern about the noise that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
from my home.

As you do not know my parents are coming over and I want to renovate my bedroom. The work is going on for the last few
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
days and
I am
really
sad to hear about the noise that disturbs you and your family
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the work will
be done
by the day after tomorrow.

I
deeply
apologize for all the trouble I have caused you and your family. I will instruct the worker to not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
much noise and not cause unnecessary trouble for your family.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that the workers will work until the evening time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that you can sleep during the night-time. Thank you for bearing with me.

I am sorry to have caused you trouble.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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