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Dear Mr. Jonson As a matter of fact, I am writing this letter to inform you that I need some time off work. There are many aspects about mentioned matter, the first thing that I want to talk about is related to I am working to my home part-time because expenses life are high. To provide more explanation, I should say that I have three children and I want to spend more time with my family. In addition to this, It is good to point out my apartment is outside the city and I am on the road for 2 hours every day. As far as the purpose of this letter is concerned, I should say that I could be covered my work in my home perfectly to be satisfying for you. Yours faithfully, Kiarash Fadavi

Dear Mr. Jonson

As a matter of fact, I am writing this letter to inform you that I need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time off work.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 aspects about mentioned matter, the first
 thing that I want to talk about is related
 to I am working to my home part-time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 expenses life are high. To provide more explanation, I should say that I have three children and I want to spend more time with my family. In addition
 to this, It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 to point out my apartment is outside the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).city, and
city and
 I am on the road for 2 hours every day.

As far as the purpose of this letter is concerned
, I should say that I could be covered
 my work in my home perfectly
 to be satisfying for you.

Yours faithfully
,

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