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You work in a gym but you are not a qualified gym instructor A friend has written to you for advice on how to get fit and healthier Write a letter to your friend offering some suggestions In your letter remind your friend that you are not an instructor of

You work in a gym but you are not a qualified gym instructor A friend has written to you for advice on how to get fit and healthier Write a letter to your friend offering some suggestions In your letter remind your friend that you are not an instructor of 7apE6

Dear Mary, I was glad to hear you are visiting my place of work. I'm writing in regards to your enquiry on tips on how to stay healthy and fit. I'm sure you're aware that I work as an assistant trainer at the gym centre and not yet a professional teacher. However, I can give you few advice on how you can be healthier and fit. firstly, you should cut down on the quantity of food and reduce your junks consumption as this is not healthy for the body. Secondly, you can go for jogging and road-work on weekends which is often you free period. Furthermore, swimming can be helpful especially since am aware you love it. May I suggest that you speak to one of our best skilled instructor who has been tutoring for the past 20 years. I'm sure you'll be offered all the necessary information but with extra charge for one on one tutorial and practical class sections. Awaiting your response as soon as possible. Best wishes, Toyin

Dear Mary,

I was glad to hear you are visiting my place of work. I'm writing Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 your Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiry' is British English.inquiry
enquiry
 on tips on how to stay healthy and fit.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm sure you're aware that I work as an assistant trainer at the gym Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and not yet
 a professional teacher.

However
, I can give you Possible agreement error. The noun advice seems to be uncountable; consider using: "little advice".little advice
few advice
 on how you can be healthier and fit. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirstly
firstly
, you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down on the quantity of food and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 your junks consumption as this is not healthy for the body. Secondly
, you can go for jogging and road-work on weekends which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 you free period. Furthermore
, swimming can be helpful especially
 since am aware you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it.

May I suggest that you speak to one of our best skilled instructor who has been tutoring for the past 20 years. I'm sure you'll be offered
 all the necessary information This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 with extra charge for one on one tutorial and practical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 sections.

Awaiting your response as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Best wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.ToxinToyingTo yinToy in
Toyin