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You work in a company that used to make sports results every year, but this year you didn't settle

You work in a company that used to make sports results every year, but this year you didn't settle NVdWm

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to explain why our company is not conducting an health event this year. As you know that last year was a hard year for everyone in the universe why not? if its a year where the small virus which called COVID-19 changed the whole live! . Since our company is a Start-Up its Revenue very effected and decreased by the virus. Now in this year we are gradually going back to normal and we focus on raising our Capital between investing and borrowing Activities and we expected a high growth by the end of this year. Helping people to have a happy life and live with a good health, This is our mission since we start in 2019. We have lunched many events talking about how workouts help the body on managing blood pressure and supporting wight loss. Also its assist mental health by reducing stress and put people on a better mood, and we see how our event helps society and we promises to Continue our nice journey in the next year. Thank you for understanding our situation Yours faithfully, Reema

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 why our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is not conducting Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 health This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 this year.

As you know that last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 was a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 for everyone in the universe why not? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 a It is better to use 'year' with the time-relative pronoun 'when': "year when". (Alternatively, use 'in/on which')year when
year where
 the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 virus which called COVID-19 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 the whole This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
! Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 Since our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
Start
-Up its Revenue This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 effected and decreased by the virus. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 we are gradually
 going back to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).normal, and
normal and
 we focus on raising our Capital between investing and borrowing Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Activities, and
Activities and
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 a high growth by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this year.

Helping This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to have a happy life and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health, This is our mission since we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 in 2019. We have lunched This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 talking about how workouts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the body on managing blood pressure and supporting wight loss. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 its assist mental health by reducing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and put This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 on a better mood, and we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 how our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).society, and
society and
 we The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "promise"promise
promises
 to Continue our nice journey in the next
 year.

Thank you for understanding our situation

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.REMA
Reema