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Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say: congratulate your friend, ask when would be possible for you to visit, ask what present they would like

Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say: congratulate your friend, ask when would be possible for you to visit, ask what present they would like 2r9PA
Dear Maja, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I'm writing this letter to express the happiness in my heart for the another page in your life. Congratulations for your second born Ali! I am so delighted to know that you gave birth to a baby boy, although it will be more challenging and tough to take care of the two kids, I know how loving and motherly you are and you do adore kids a lot. However, I want you to know that your family and especially me are always behind your back whenever you need our help. Take care of yourself and be healthy for the every day struggles. I want to be with you as soon as possible as I can't wait to meet your lovely prince. When would be the best time for me to come and visit? Maybe we can also talk about my upcoming wedding, moreover, I don't want to miss the chance for us to plan about the summer vacation that we sought-after every year. Just tell me the perfect time and I will com running to your doorstep. Kidding! I am very excited to buy cute little dresses for your eldest and of course more thrilled about what I can find for your baby. Do you have anything in mind, or do you have any personal choice? I really wanted to bring a present for all of you. Perhaps if you need more things for the baby, a crib, stroller, car seat or even blender, it would be my pleasure to bring something that you needed. I love you and see you soon! Maychelle
Dear
Maja
, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I'm writing this letter to express the happiness in my heart for the another page in your life.

Congratulations
for
your second born Ali! I am
so
delighted to know that you gave birth to a baby boy, although it will be more challenging and tough to take care of the two kids, I know how loving and
motherly
you are and you do adore kids a lot.
However
, I want you to know that your family and
especially
me are always behind your back whenever you need our
help
. Take care of yourself and be healthy for
the every day
struggles.

I want to be with you as
soon
as possible as I can't wait to
meet
your lovely prince. When would be the best time for me to
come
and visit? Maybe we can
also
talk about my upcoming wedding,
moreover
, I don't want to miss the chance for us to plan about the summer vacation that
we sought-after
every year.
Just
tell
me the perfect time and I will com running to your doorstep. Kidding!

I am
very
excited to
buy
cute
little
dresses for your eldest and
of course
more thrilled about what I can find for your baby. Do you have anything in mind, or do you have any personal choice? I
really
wanted to bring a present for all of you. Perhaps if you need more things for the baby, a crib, stroller, car seat or even blender, it would be my pleasure to bring something that you needed.

I
love
you and
see
you
soon
!

Maychelle
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IELTS letter Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say: congratulate your friend, ask when would be possible for you to visit, ask what present they would like

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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