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You have just returned from a trip and think you have left your camera in the hotel. Write a letter to the Hotel Manager. In your letter: explain the circumstances ask if they could look for your camera say what you would like the hotel to do

You have just returned from a trip and think you have left your camera in the hotel. Write a letter to the Hotel Manager. In your letter: explain the circumstances ask if they could look for your camera say what you would like the hotel to do Q8Wky
Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently visited your guesthouse and stayed for a week in Pondicherry when our group of friends landed for a vacation on 24th June. Although we collected all our items, missed a brand new canon camera in my room. For your reference, room number 501, East Pondicherry branch, The Plaza hotel. To eloborate on this, I believe we left the camera in the middle of the wardrobe in a hurry and it has a battery with it. I would request you to search for camera in the mentioned space. Not only, this a simple camera but also, my mothers gift on my last birthday so I would really much appreciated if you could investigate on this further. Since Last year one of my collegue forgot his wallet in one of your branches and got returned to his home, from that day have a nice immpression on your management. Hence, I urge you to send the item to my home location which was registered when we checked-in. I would feel really happy if you transfer through postal services otherwise DTDC services. Looking forward for your assistance. Thanks, Manaswini
Dear Sir or Madam,

I have recently visited your guesthouse and stayed for a week in Pondicherry when our group of friends landed for a vacation on 24th June. Although we collected all our items, missed a
brand new
canon
camera
in my room. For your reference, room number 501, East Pondicherry branch, The Plaza hotel.

To
eloborate
on this, I believe we
left
the
camera
in the middle of the wardrobe in a hurry and it has a battery with it. I would request you to search for
camera
in the mentioned space. Not
only
, this a simple
camera
but
also
, my mothers gift on my last birthday
so
I would
really
much appreciated if you could investigate on this
further
. Since Last year one of my
collegue
forgot his wallet in one of your branches and
got
returned to his home, from that day have a nice
immpression
on your management.

Hence
, I urge you to
send
the item to my home location which
was registered
when we
checked
-in. I would feel
really
happy if you transfer through postal services
otherwise
DTDC
services.

Looking forward for your assistance.

Thanks,

Manaswini
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IELTS letter You have just returned from a trip and think you have left your camera in the hotel. Write a letter to the Hotel Manager. In your letter: explain the circumstances ask if they could look for your camera say what you would like the hotel to do

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  American English
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6.0
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