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New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams.

New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams. NVdnd

Dear Neighbour, I hope you have settled in nicely in your new house. This residential area is a really fantastic place to raise kids and enjoy a good night’s rest. The thing is that I am not accustomed yet to the high volume of your band practices and that is really impacting on my whole situation at the given time. Next week are my finals I cannot jeopardize my grades anymore since I am barely passing. I usually get knee deep in my studies on Mondays and Tuesdays but due to the volume it can be pretty hard to stay in the zone. Can you please move your practices from beginning of the week till the end of it? This would create a win-win situation for both parties, and we could both do what we desire. This ordeal of mine will not last long. As I said previously my big exam is coming up and then we can all forget about this undesirable time.

Dear Possible spelling mistake. 'Neighbour' is British English.Neighbor
Neighbour
,

I hope you have settled in nicely
 in your new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. This residential area is a really
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good
 night’s rest. The thing is that I am not accustomed yet
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really
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given
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are
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get
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knee deep
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but
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hard
 to stay in the zone. Can you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
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move
 your practices from beginning of the week till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of it? This would create a win-win situation for both parties, and we could both do what we desire.

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big
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 then we can all forget about this undesirable time. 