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elaborate the hostel life and write down the advantages and disadvantages

elaborate the hostel life and write down the advantages and disadvantages DN7EW
First of all, allow me to express my gratitude for your willingness to help me. Thank you for taking time to speak with me. I sincerely appreciate the time you will spend helping me. I really appreciate you and I look forward to continuing to work together. Currently I am a PhD student working on my dissertation. I am new to Rstudio. Therefore your help will certainly be very useful to analyze my data using Rstudio. Thank you so much for considering my request for help and you have inspired me to work dissertation using Rstudio. Again, thank you so much. I sincerely appreciate your generosity. v My data includes annual total rainfall, maximum, minimum and mean temperature from 1981-2017 v I want to establish trends for all and then to forecast up to 2050 Thank you in advance for your help. Sincerely,
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to express my gratitude for your willingness to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Thank
you for taking time to speak with me. I
sincerely
appreciate the time you will spend helping me. I
really
appreciate you and I look forward to continuing to work together.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Currently
I am a PhD student working on my dissertation. I am new to
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Rstudio
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
will
certainly
be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
useful to analyze my data using
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Rstudio
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Thank
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much for considering my request for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and you have inspired me to work dissertation using
Possible spelling mistake found.
Rstudio
. Again,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
thank
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much. I
sincerely
appreciate your generosity.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
v
My data includes annual total rainfall, maximum, minimum and mean temperature from 1981-2017

v I want to establish trends for all and then to forecast up to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
2050 Thank
you in advance for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter elaborate the hostel life and write down the advantages and disadvantages

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
143 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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