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Write an application letter for job in museum

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the job in the museum which I saw advertised in the Navbahor magazine last Monday. This is an ideal job for me given my enthusiasm for labour, my related experience and qualifications. I am 25 years old and as you can see from my CV, l have completed a History degree at Cambridge University. Prior to this, l studied in grammar school where l obtained 9 AGCSES and 3 A Level in History, English and Russion. My degree is B2 in English and three years ago l hold a certificate in Russian therefore I am about to renovate the degree nowadays. Two years ago, I was employed as guide in Tashkent. Additionally, have had experience of describing. Then I have spent one year working as assistant historian and this work was extremely enjoyable however, I had to stop it for some reasons which belong to wages, distance. I enclose futher details of my education and qualifications. I think I would be suitable candidate for this museum. If you want me to attend an interview, I am available at any time in this month. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Mamurova Nigina
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the job in the museum which I
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saw
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Navbahor
magazine last Monday. This is an ideal job for me
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given
my enthusiasm for
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labour
, my related experience and qualifications. I am 25 years
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and as you can
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see
from my CV, l have completed a History degree at Cambridge University. Prior to this, l studied in grammar school where l obtained 9
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AGCSES
and 3 A Level in History, English and
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Russion
. My degree is B2 in English and three years ago l hold a certificate in Russian
therefore
I am about to renovate the degree nowadays. Two years ago, I
was employed
as guide in Tashkent.
Additionally
, have had experience of describing. Then I have spent one
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year
working as assistant historian and this work was
extremely
enjoyable
however
, I had to
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stop
it for
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some
reasons which belong to wages, distance. I enclose
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futher
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details
of my education and qualifications. I
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think
I would be suitable candidate for this museum. If you want me to attend an interview, I am available at any time in this month. I look forward to hearing from you as
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soon
as possible. Yours
faithfully
,
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Mamurova
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Nigina

IELTS letter Write an application letter for job in museum

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
207 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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