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Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you.

Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you. KnAxw

Dear Tom, I am writing this letter with regard to the damage that you caused to my 2019 KIA Cerato while you were parking in front of my front yard two days ago. The left mirror of my car was totally crushed making it look like it missed an ear. Moreover, there were massive scratches on the left side and the backlight was completely destroyed because you drove in reverse too fast and could not control your vehicle. At that moment, I felt really upset because it was my favorite car and was newly bought 2 weeks ago. However, I am not angry at you as you have been a very kind and good neighbor to my family ever since we got here. As for my compensation, I just need you to pay me back the money for the repair fees. I already took the car to maintenance that day and my car insurance will cover up some money. I will pay the rest with my own credit card and you can give me the money later. I look forward to receiving my compensation. Yours faithfully, Truong

Dear Tom, I am writing this letter with regard to the damage that you caused to my 2019 KIA Possible spelling mistake found.Erato
Cerato
 while you were parking in front of my front yard two days ago.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 mirror of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 was totally
 crushed making it look like it missed an ear. Moreover
, there were massive scratches on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side and the backlight was completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you drove in reverse too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 and could not control your vehicle.

At that moment, I felt really
 upset This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it was my favorite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 and was newly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 2 weeks ago. However
, I am not angry at you as you have been a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 kind and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 neighbor to my family ever since we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 here.

As for my compensation, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 need you to pay me back the money for the repair fees. I already took the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 to maintenance that day and my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 insurance will cover up This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 money. I will pay the rest with my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 credit card and you can give me the money later.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to receiving my compensation.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Truing
Truong