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You placed an online order for a flower vase. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Write a letter to the manager of the company.

You placed an online order for a flower vase. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Write a letter to the manager of the company. lergJ

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the flower vase bought from your online store last Saturday. Well, I had ordered an Italian-style rustic crystal flower vase from your online portal by paying a huge price. It is 2. 5 feet in length and 12 inches wide in size. It was decorated with artificial roses and a bottle green color. However, when I received the parcel of the vase, it was well packed. But when I opened the packaging, it was completely damaged. Let me explain to you in detail. The upper portion of the vase was slightly cracked, whereas the bottom side was completely damaged. On above that, both side handles were broken. I was shocked after seeing the condition of the precious flower vase. Now, I request you to collect this damaged vase and replace the same with a similar model. Either replace the similar model or refund my money as soon as possible. Request you to look into this issue. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking You. Yours Sincerely, Bob

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the flower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontainerurnjarpot
vase
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your online store last Saturday.

Well, I had ordered an Italian-style rustic crystal flower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontainerurnjarpot
vase
 from your online portal by paying a huge price. It is 2. Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.5 feet (1.52 m)5 feet (1.52 meters)5 feet (ca. 152 cm)5 feet (152.4 cm)5 feet (ca. 152 centimeters)5 feet (152.4 centimeters)
5 feet
 in length and Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.12 inches (ca. 30 cm)12 inches (30.48 cm)12 inches (ca. 30 centimeters)12 inches (30.48 centimeters)12 inches (0.3 m)12 inches (0.3 meters)
12 inches
A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.wide
wide in size
. It was decorated
 with artificial roses and a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.bottle-green
bottle green
 color.

However
, when I received the parcel of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontainerurnjarpot
vase
, it was well packed. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 when I opened the packaging, it was completely damaged. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 to you in detail. The upper portion of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontainerurnjarpot
vase
 was slightly
 cracked, whereas the bottom side was completely damaged. On above that, both side This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :is responsible for
handles
were broken
. I was shocked
 after seeing the condition of the precious flower vase.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, I request you to collect this damaged You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontainerurnjarpot
vase
 and replace the same with a similar model. Either replace the similar model or refund my money as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Request you to look into this issue.

Looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Thanking You.

Yours Sincerely
, Bob