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Some teachers say students should be organized into groups to study. Others argue that students should be made to study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method. Which one do you think is more effective?

Dear Reggie, It is great to know that you are intending to go for a camping holiday in the coming summer, and also thank you for taking me into confidence for much advice. I think you should take the opportunity and make it this summer. I think that you should go for a camping holiday due to the fact from my past camping experience, I can say that you will quite enjoy it. After all, this camping holiday will offer you the opportunity to take a long walk in the wilderness and observe nature in its true habitat. You can also go to a nearby lake for fishing or swimming which you have always wanted to do. on the contrary, the best thing about this camping holiday will be that it will actually improve your mood and rejuvenate you like nothing else. Having said that, however, there are a number of disadvantages of such camping holiday as well, such as sharing bathrooms with other people at the campsite, bad weather, and dealing with bug bites and hazardous animals. Anyway, I also would have loved to go camping with you this summer, on the contrary since my cousin is visiting me from abroad this summer, I will ought to give up on that idea. Take care and stay fine. Warm wishes, Carlos
Dear Reggie,

It is great to know that you are intending to go for a camping
holiday
in the coming summer, and
also
thank you for taking me into confidence for much advice. I
think
you should take the opportunity and
make
it this summer.

I
think
that you should go for a camping
holiday
due to the fact from my past camping experience, I can say that you will quite enjoy it.
After all
, this camping
holiday
will offer you the opportunity to take a long walk in the wilderness and observe nature in its true habitat. You can
also
go to a nearby lake for fishing or swimming which you have always wanted to do.
on the contrary
, the best thing about this camping
holiday
will be that it will actually
improve
your mood and rejuvenate you like nothing else.

Having said that,
however
, there are a number of disadvantages of such camping
holiday
as well
, such as sharing bathrooms with other
people
at the campsite,
bad
weather, and dealing with bug bites and hazardous animals.

Anyway, I
also
would have
loved
to go camping with you this summer,
on the contrary
since my cousin is visiting me from abroad this summer, I will ought to give up on that
idea
.

Take care and stay fine.

Warm wishes,

Carlos
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IELTS letter Some teachers say students should be organized into groups to study. Others argue that students should be made to study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method. Which one do you think is more effective?

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