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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it, You should write at least 150 words.

You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it, D98a
I would like to work at our company's head office in Canada for the next six months. Unfortunately, one of our colleagues from the quality control team met with an accident. So he will not be available until he gets fully recovered. The production release is due in six months and it will be difficult to hire someone with the required skill set in a very short period. The thing is, right now I am working as a backup for two teams, quality control and production at our location in India. Luckily, there is a difference in the time zone for our office and head office location. I will be working at the head office in a quality control team as a full-time employee and extend my working hours whenever required for our office location. This will be a win-win situation for me as well as the company. There will be no need to hire a new associate and commitment will also be fulfilled. I would be most grateful if you could make those arrangements for me. As a manager, you can put up my request to the management and help me with the documentation required. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Prashant Wankhade
I would like to work at our
company
's head
office
in Canada for the
next
six months. Unfortunately, one of our colleagues from the quality control team met with an accident.
So
he will not be available until he
gets
fully
recovered. The production release is due in six months and it will be difficult to hire someone with the required
skill
set in a
very
short period.

The thing is, right
now
I am working as a backup for two teams, quality control and production at our location in India. Luckily, there is a difference in the time zone for our
office
and head
office
location. I will be working at the head
office
in a quality control team as a full-time employee and extend my working hours whenever required for our
office
location. This will be a win-win situation for me
as well
as the
company
. There will be no need to hire a new associate and commitment will
also
be fulfilled
.

I would be most grateful if you could
make
those arrangements for me. As a manager, you can put up my request to the management and
help
me with the documentation required.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Prashant
Wankhade
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IELTS letter You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it,

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
205 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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