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Write a paragraph about Hanoi, your home town or your home village

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Hi everyone, my name is Thang. I’m 19 year old. I live with my parent in Hanoi, the capital city of the Vietnam. It is located in North of Vietnam, on the Red river. Hanoi is one of the tourist destinations for most foreigners coming to Vietnam because when visiting Hanoi, it is impossible not to mention the scenic attractions such as Uncle Ho's Mausoleum, One Pillar Pagoda, West Lake, Turtle Tower – Hoan Kiem Lake, etc. You should spend a day in Hanoi, it will not disappoint you, you will be struck by the beauty of the city, from the scenery to the people. Hanoians are warm and welcoming. They are always willing to assist others. Hanoians are not showy and flashy. They still maintain a humble and humble lifestyle. Do not show too much capacity, or self-level. There is a slow, gentle expression always in Hanoi people. Because Hanoi is so beautiful, an increasing number of people are moving here to live, causing the city's population to skyrocket. This has resulted in greenhouse effects and air pollution in the area. I realy hate going out on rush hours, because the streets look like they ảe burning under the heat of exhaust fumes and it is hard to go for even a short distance. Hơever, for me this city is still a lovely and wortly place to live.
Hi everyone, my name is
Thang
. I’m 19 year
old
. I
live
with my parent in Hanoi, the capital city of the Vietnam. It
is located
in North of Vietnam, on the Red river. Hanoi is one of the tourist destinations for most foreigners coming to Vietnam
because
when visiting Hanoi, it is impossible not to mention the scenic attractions such as Uncle Ho's Mausoleum, One Pillar Pagoda, West Lake, Turtle Tower
Hoan
Kiem
Lake, etc. You should spend a day in Hanoi, it will not disappoint you, you will
be struck
by the beauty of the city, from the scenery to the
people
.
Hanoians
are warm and welcoming. They are always willing to assist others.
Hanoians
are not showy and flashy. They
still
maintain a humble and humble lifestyle. Do not
show
too much capacity, or self-level. There is a slow, gentle expression always in Hanoi
people
.
Because
Hanoi is
so
beautiful
, an increasing number of
people
are moving here to
live
, causing the city's population to skyrocket. This has resulted in greenhouse effects and air pollution in the area. I
realy
hate going out on rush hours,
because
the streets look like they
ảe
burning under the heat of exhaust fumes and it is
hard
to go for even a short distance.
Hơever
, for me this city is
still
a lovely and
wortly
place to
live
.
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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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