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You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Manager This letter is to bring your attention that I am interested in a new training course which is held by our company. I am currently working as a project manager in your enterprise. I saw this poster on company’s website. It might be crucial in strengthening my skills. As a lot of vocational courses were mentioned on the poster, I personally would choose ‘Mental Health Program’ of two weeks. Although, it is on my budget, it will eventually be a learning experience for me. Your guidance regarding the course would immensely help me decide whether to take up the course or not. Furthermore, I will mail you my credentials consequently you can register my name for the course. This course will emphasise on our overall sanity, how we can tackle stress in our lives and stay positive. I consider this is the need of the hour for every employee who are constantly working and neglecting their mental well-being. This training will guide us towards attitude modification and behaviour change. Therefore, resulting in better performance in the workplace. This is an amazing opportunity for me to improve my soft skills through this class. Please grant me leaves of two weeks. It would be really supportive. Thanks and regards
Dear Manager This letter is to bring your attention that I
am interested
in a new training
course
which
is held
by our
company
. I am
currently
working as a project manager in your enterprise. I
saw
this poster on
company
’s website. It might be crucial in strengthening my
skills
.

As
a lot of
vocational
courses
were mentioned
on the poster, I
personally
would choose ‘Mental Health Program’ of two weeks. Although, it is on my budget, it will
eventually
be a learning experience for me. Your guidance regarding the
course
would
immensely
help
me decide whether to take up the
course
or not.
Furthermore
, I will mail you my credentials
consequently
you can register my name for the course.

This
course
will
emphasise
on our
overall
sanity, how we can tackle
stress
in our
lives
and stay
positive
. I consider this is the need of the hour for every employee who are
constantly
working and neglecting their mental well-being. This training will guide us towards attitude modification and
behaviour
change
.
Therefore
, resulting in better performance in the workplace.

This is an amazing opportunity for me to
improve
my soft
skills
through this
class
.
Please
grant me
leaves
of two weeks. It would be
really
supportive.

Thanks and regards
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IELTS letter You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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