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Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty. In your letter you should tell why it is happening? What problems it will cause? And give your suggestions.

Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty. In your letter you should tell why it is happening? What problems it will cause? And give your suggestions. 5MpV
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that the street in which i live has become dirty. Nowadays, the there is no dustbin has placed in our locality and hence people of our street throw their garbage to an open area, that is in front of our lane. In the result, the garbage comes in the street, this scene ruins the image of our society. Moreover, this situation give birth to many diseases like viral infactions, malaria, dangue, food poisioning etcetera. people residing in our area, are falling prey with this diseases. I would like to suggest you, that the dirty area should be cleaned and sanitized also to make the area infection-free, and also there should be placed dustbins in every street for the garbages. I look forward to a prompting action from your side. Yours faithfully, Monika Sharma, March 23, 2021.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that the
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street
in which
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live
has become dirty. Nowadays, the there is no dustbin has placed in our locality and
hence
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people
of our
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street
throw their garbage to an open
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area
,
that is
in front of our lane.

In the result, the garbage
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comes
in the
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street
, this scene ruins the image of our society.
Moreover
, this situation give birth to
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many
diseases like viral
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infactions
, malaria,
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dangue
, food
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poisioning
etcetera.
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people
residing in our
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area
, are falling prey with
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this
diseases.

I would like to suggest you, that the dirty
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area
should
be cleaned
and sanitized
also
to
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make
the
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area
infection-free, and
also
there should
be placed
dustbins in every
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street
for the
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garbages
.

I look forward to a prompting action from your side.

Yours
faithfully
, Monika Sharma, March 23, 2021.

IELTS letter Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty. In your letter you should tell why it is happening? What problems it will cause? And give your suggestions.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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